Thread:Christian Sirolli/@comment-1777104-20200207025119

Hi, Christian. It's been a long time since we communicated. I am trying to "clean up" your article a little and noted that your referencing format is both quite thorough and confusing at the same time. In adding detail, I am not quite sure how to add references!

Presently, I am trying to add detail to the names. It would fit better to list the names before the history of God's Spirit at work. The significance of the episode with Ananias and Saphira could be added to that account (God and the Spirit being equated). A more prominent link to the article on Yahweh would help a lot..

I really enjoy your work-- and especially your commitment to detail. Keep it up.

SouthWriter (talk) 02:51, February 7, 2020 (UTC) 